another one for Halloweensie in a totally different vein…
Carrie crossed the street to avoid the trick-or-treaters, and walked by the graveyard. The guy in the skeleton tee-shirt was the creep who always bugged her at school.
“Hey, Red!” he shouted. Carrie walked faster, but he crossed toward her. “When are you gonna live a little?”
Carrie stiffened, “The best thing about the pandemic has been not seeing you.”
He lowered his mask, “Afraid I’ll breathe on you?”
A voice hissed, “Back off!” Brandon froze.
Carrie turned to see her brother, hair as red as hers and twice as curly, looking better than the day that he was buried.
Oooooh, this one is definitely creepy. Nice job, and good luck!
Oh, I absolutely adore this ending! How to tell a great story in just a few words! Bravo!
So freakin’ good!!!
Wow, I was shocked! Brilliant ending!
Wow! I got goosebumps on this one! Wonderful ending
Yikes! This gave me chills!
So glad it worked!
You win the spooktacular award for this one!
Glad you enjoyed it!
What a scary turn of events!
Surprised me, too!
Woah, did not expect that ending! Spooky.
Wow! So spooky, yet full of warmth, too! Keep going with it!